NethergateWriters

Note of the Meeting of 17 November 2021 in St Andrew’s Brewing Company private room.

And then we were five…

Sue, Roddy, Richard, David C. and Maggie Bartlett
(This was Maggie’s first attendance at an NW meeting.)

Apologies from Sandra, Susan, Rupert, David F., Fraser

Richard in the Chair, David taking notes

1. Work presented.

Division of Spoils (renamed Trust)
The background to this ‘cautionary tale’ was a chat with a friend who outlined the situation. David then used it as the basis of the story.
Some discussion ensued as to the issues that can arise over female/male friendship outwith marriage. There was agreement that keeping meetings secret leads to a  breakdown of trust, even if assurances are given about the nature of such friendships.
As for the narrative, we liked the way the backstory emerged gradually; and that the ending was suitably bleak.

Peas in a Pod
Roddy summarised the first part of this story, then read part 2.
Settings, dialogue, description and characterisation were seen as real strengths. In particular, the descriptions, both of the people portrayed and the natural environment attracted much praise. Richard commented especially on the quality of ,as he put it, outdoor writing. And the transition of reluctant spliff smoker into enthusiastic disciple was handled with dexterity and authenticity, demonstrating that the characterisation was very well done.
Roddy said that there were about another two thousand words to be added, once he had edited the first two parts.

The Parish Council AGM
We thoroughly enjoyed this hilarious piece of flash fiction from Sue.
The background was described economically, but with each detail and allusion being revealed as essential to the impact of the revelation. This was an expertly-handled example of the genre.

Once Upon a Time in a Field
This was the third edition of the story. A more contemporary focus had been introduced, and efforts made to remove ambiguities. We thought that they had not been in vain.
One caveat was the register of language used in the central part, that of the young boy. Some words and expressions were seen as too advanced for a youngster of his age. But progress has been made!
The description of the field at twilight was singled out for positive comment.

2.  Business.

Anthology launch.  This will be on 11 December in the DCA, taking place between 2-6pm.  Hire cost is £130.
There will be drinks (purchased on site) and signage.
40 copies of the book will be available for selling on the day. (Susan is also selling online). Past anthologies will also be available.
We need members to volunteer to read extracts from their stories.

Anniversary of NW. A reminder to members to create work related to the themes of Reflection, Memory and Anniversary.

Writing tuition. Roddie is seeking interest  from members in taking part in sessions (probably six in total) to practise and develop writing skills. The sessions will take place on the weeks between scheduled NW Meetings, via Zoom.

A reminder of the Scottish Event in St. Andrews Brewing Company on 30 November starting at 2pm. We’re invited to partake as appropriate, and bring work to read if so desired (and bold enough!).

(There will not be a Meeting on 5 January 2022. Date of AGM to be confirmed).

Next Meeting - Wednesday 1 December at 7pm in the Brewhouse.
Sue to Chair, Richard to Minute.

David, 22 November 2021.